Mention who the speaker is and what their intent/argument is. Starting off with a hook statement that relates
to the topic of the source is a nice way to pull the reader into your analysis.
• Maintain complex thought of the rhetorical situation and sophistication throughout the essay.
• Your thesis statement needs to reflect the author’s argument. If it is a closed thesis statement, you need to
include the points that you will expand on in the body. If it is an open thesis statement, you need to include a
nice “blanket or umbrella phrase” that you can expand on within the body. Below are a few examples:
o In her speech, “The Politics of Fiction,” Elif Shafak appeals to the audience by applying meaningful
anecdotes, humor, and a clear organization of her points to support her argument that fiction can
bring unity among cultures.
o Elif Shafak intertwines ethos successfully throughout her speech with an authoritatively passionate
tone, sentimental anecdotes, and the usage of motifs to emphasize the power a story provides.
o Elif Shafak substantiates her argument that fiction transcends cultural barriers through polished
imagery, informative anecdotes, and eloquent syntax.
Body Paragraph #1
• Look at the choices the author makes and how that contributes to the support of their argument. For example, anecdotes (personal stories) are told to build a connection with the audience. You can also show how an author conjures emotion (pathos) to move the audience, boost credibility (ethos) about him/herself, or implements logic (logos) to support their argument. The author’s tone can be analyzed, as well. Remember, tone is the attitude the author has toward the subject matter.
• You should only focus on one choice/device, appeal, or tone per paragraph.
• Be sure to weave in quotes or paraphrases from the source, and add an explanation for each quote or paraphrase that is used.
• Use transitions – those always looks nice.
• Avoid summarizing – you’re analyzing how the argument was delivered.
Body Paragraph #2
• Same as above
Body Paragraph #3
• Same as above
Conclusion
• The conclusion is where you need to summarize your thesis and the points you have made within your analysis. Also, add a closing thought or future implications.
* This is just a template…not all essays are five paragraphs.