Hi, I need help with this assignment I have already started it but I don’t like it I want you to use it but make it better!
Write two paragraphs describing the luxury setting you can imagine. You may not include (action, plot etc) only setting.
Expand and explode the setting for the reader. Describe every aspect inside and out. Appeal to all five issues use figurative language in order to create images in readers’ mind.
Figurative language examples to use like metaphors, similes, alliteration, and repetition to add detail.
Emotion (mood) you want to evoke in the reader? I want readers to feel comfortable and relaxed
Please add to my writing and make it better use my IDEA
I carried my umbrella as I made my way to the motel while being drenched by the rain. As I grabbed my card and entered my motel room, I felt the warmness of the fireplace spread across my body. Also, I could smell the scent of lavender that was present in the lit candle. As I walked to the bathroom I noticed how the bathroom was as clean as a bar of soap. I bathed in the enormous bathtub pained gold, as lit candles surrounded the bath tube. Afterward, I walked through the marble tiles of the gigantic kitchen. The fridge was filled with food and drinks. I noticed the enormous basket of fruit placed on the table next to my master-bed. I took a cup of champagne in my hand as I sat on the cozy white couch. I could see the buildings of New York City outside of the wide window inside my motel room. Time after time, I could hear voices and footsteps. As I relaxed at the sound of rain.
